Simplifying and distorting feel similar while you are doing them, and are entirely different to the person listening.
The line between them is simple: you may drop detail, but you may not drop conditions.
The rule
- Detail can go: sample sizes, instrument names, statistical machinery.
- Conditions cannot: who it applies to, in what circumstances.
- This method works and this method works for children under six are different claims.
Start with why it matters
- Non-specialists need the stake before the content.
- One sentence: what problem, whose problem.
- Then the finding, then how you know.
Use comparison, carefully
- Compare to something the listener already knows.
- Every analogy breaks somewhere — say where.
- One analogy per explanation, not several layered.
Numbers people can hold
- Relative and absolute effects give very different impressions.
- Give both when the difference matters.
- Use units the listener has intuition for.
Test it
- Explain it to someone outside the field and ask them to repeat it back.
- Where they get it wrong is where you were unclear.
- Not where they listened badly.
One thing worth remembering
Never drop the conditions when simplifying.
The shortened claim is the one that travels — into a press release, into a policy brief, into a headline — and a condition removed at the first retelling is gone from every retelling after it.
Câu hỏi thường gặp
What is the line between simplifying and distorting?
You may drop detail, but you may not drop conditions.
What detail can go?
Sample sizes, instrument names and statistical machinery — but not who it applies to and in what circumstances.
How should you start?
With why it matters — one sentence on what problem and whose problem, then the finding, then how you know.
How should analogies be used?
Compare to something the listener knows, say where the analogy breaks, and use one analogy rather than several layered.
How do you test an explanation?
Explain it to someone outside the field and ask them to repeat it back — where they get it wrong is where you were unclear.